scottsee wrote:
I am a hardworking, dedicated individual who is striving to achieve a carrier in the Networking field. I have a deep passion for Network Security and Operations and wish to continue this profession indefinitely.
I like it, its short and to the point!
But then I'm very sure that there is a big cultural difference between the US and Sweden when it comes to interviews and employments in general.
Edit: Here in Sweden its fairly normal to add a personal letter to a resume when your applying for a job.
The personal letter will off course differ from application to application. But a common theme for me is a long time interest in IT in general. My constant drive for personal education and drive to learn new technologies. And that the job I'm looking for should be challenging and ideally have some variation.
All this happens to be true. And from personal experience that's what employers are looking for in an employee within IT since its an ever evolving field. And for someone starting out in a new field, a keenness to learn ought to me a major point.